Your Eyes
Your eyes are dark,
They attract me
Your eyes are lovely
They are as deep as a sea.
They hold the true
Meaning of life,
With lots of love,
They say you are shy,
Are as pure as Whiteness of a dove
Your eyes like a
Like a rainbow occurs
They unfold like bud of flowers
Silence of river
Lie in them
They are very sweet, ahem!
When they open,
A bird files away
When they close
An enigma rolls in, I say.
As pure as halo
As bright as sun,
As calm as moon.
Sometimes, they also smile for fun
When they tell lie
They drop like a wave
When they cry
It glitters as water on the petal of rose
Your eyes are you
It tells everything about you.
15 comments:
its really great pleasure to read such a well written poem...hmm...nice thoughts...this poem is really praiseworthy...it shows that the poet is really very creative in thoughts and also a fabulous person...the usage of gud words,the expression of his feelings,etc. are praiseworthy...i would like to praise this person for his excellent composition of the poem,bhaiya this is a gr8 poem....i hope u keep on writing such gr8 gr8 poems n putting it on ur profile so that people can see,read and feel that u r such a gr8 poet n a creative person....i hope we will soon come to know on whoz eyes is the poem based on...
thanx a lot Malya.....ur praise... will make me grow i know.... and ur questions.... ve no answer :D ...
This poem is really touching charming and loving.....(but may i kno 4 whom u wrote this poem)(YOUR EYE)i can't express my words for this poem its so wonderful..... and in one word i would lik to say tht .....this poem is ausam lik u!!!!!!:)u r a great poet ........
may god bless u :):)!!!!!
After reading all your poems i dnt have any doubt that you are a wonderful poet,who writes fabulous poems which are really praiseworthy.I wish that i will be able to raed more and more poems written by u.Your poems can express your feelings clearly which is a great talent that you have so never let it go and in the end i would like to tel you that we all(who all have read your poems)are curious to know that in who's rememberance these marvellous poems are being written??????????We all are waiting for the answer,so plz give it fast.And all the best for everything in life
thanx a lot ridhi and anony...bt anony...u shud..ve given ur name in bracket at last :D .... and as far as d answer of d question is concernd .... its nthin lik tht ..till now...bt u all force me 2 tell u so much tht i feel i need 2 ve 1 remembrance to tell u all....wich is not goin 2 happen :P....BTW ridhi and anony... {i can guess who d anony is)...thnx once again!
ok if u can guess who d anony(that means who am i)is then plzzzzzzzzzzzz n plzzzzzzzzzzz tel it 2 me so i can tel u that u r correct or not.so plz tel me that who r u thiking i am plzzzzzzzzzzz
hmmm... i can guess who are u ... bt .. if mera "b" hua to??? :D
if u wont tel me that whom u r thinkng z me how can i tel u that u r crrct or notn if that "b" z 4 bezati then dnt wry kyunki wo nai hoga coz i thnk u can guess that who i am.so plz tel me whom r u thnkng that i am plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
i gues... madhu....Richa's fren???:O :D
I will tell u that your answer is correct or not but before that plz tel me why did i thnk that i am Madhu.Did i write nythng that Madhu also writes i mean i want 2 knw that why u thought that i am madhu i mean i can b ny1 else also so plz n plz tel me why u thought that i m MADHU plzzzzzzzzzzzz
hmm... u style of writin... see i think tht i can read ... ppl.. frm dre ..writin...speak ...and body lang...!!
ok fine but before tellng u that u r correct or not(dnt wry i will tel u that u r crrct or nt)plz tel me that wht z same in me n Madhu i mean i dnt speak 2 u that u can hear my voice n abt wrtng n body lang plz tel me wht i wrote that made u thnk that i am Madhu plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
hmmm ur timing and urs style of riting.... and wre only so curious who rote me scraps lik "apna cpu .. ups jaldi thik karvaiye"..... and u rite a lot of plz plz and plz!!!! hahaha ! :P
Duniya me kitne sare log ek hi time net istemal karte hai n abt d cpu or ups Madhu may have wrtn coz may b she wantd 2 chat wid ur sister n i wil try 2 wrt less"plz" d poem forever frndship i another fab wrk bt i jst thnk u shld check it once n abt d answer first u prvor 2 me that i am Madhu then i wil tel u that u r crrct or not
dats gr8 poem abhishek........i hope jis kisi k liye tm yeh poem likhe ho she 'll undrstnd ur feelinz........all d bst 4 it!!!!!!
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